Building a Yuri Harem~ Chapter 417 Discussion

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It is important to note that the author has split this series into "parts".

The first three parts is where Yuriha tries to build her harem and it is filled with jealousy, depressive tones, and yandere stuff. This is the part that I really liked and it was fun to see Yuriha's reactions to each love interests' advances towards her.

After the first three parts however is when the series starts becoming really slow and it becomes more of a slice of life series with girls just hanging out with each other. The yuri is overlooked and we only see glimpses of it when the love interests sexually harass Yuriha (Which happens far too often and you start to get uncomfortable reading it).

Spoiler

The s*xual harassment becomes worse when we learn that Yuriha was r*ped in the past and that's why she has such a strong distaste for men. Only Ranko learns of this fact and 30ish chapters later Ranko decides to drug Yuriha and r*pe her??? Like what??? Also Ranko knows that Yuriha has past traumas of s*xual harassment and yet she is the one who harasses Yuriha the hardest?

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Another issue is that instead of a harem, later on after the three parts this only seems like a love triangle between Yuriha, Ranko, and Sakihime. The author only wants to focus on these three so Yuzuriha and Hinoka become somewhat like background characters. Instead of a yuri harem this series instead turns into two groups of Ranko x Yuriha x Sakihime and Yuzuriha x Hinoka.

Spoiler

Sakihime also starts sexually harassing Yuriha so we have Ranko, Hinoka, and Sakihime all sexually harassing her and Yuzuriha being the only "normal" one. However since Yuzuriha is overlooked in the story it's a shame. I really like Yuzuriha since she is cute.

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Overall this series is a 3/5. A good read until the fourth part where it just turns into a slice of life about girls hanging out with each other.
 
  • #2
I love how the story goes and how detailed it is. I just wonder if it has an ending ... I just wish they could adjust the limit on their rewards so the readers can have a much longer time reading. I have already spent more or less $40 reading it so far.
 
  • #6
Congratulations to the author, this is a really good story. I love it!!!
 
  • #7
So I finished the book and I have never felt so in love with a book before. Ignoring my boyfriend for a whole 2 days was well worth it haha. Thanks for this beautiful series. I am excited for whats next.
 
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