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Author is certainly a noob in writing a novel. Although Shen Miao Qi is shown as unworthy and selfish character but if you delve into the story with clear mind, one will truly found flaws how the novel is portrayed. Yu Xiang is Shen's daughter that transmigrator knows knowing that her life trajectory is not so good, she start to hold the golden thigh i.e Yu Pin Yan, which was a wise decision as nobody would love to be wasted. But eventually reader could easily find that she is same as the villain portrayed by the author i.e Shen Miao Qi.A transmigrator who had lived 25 years in modern era doesn't know the basic difference between gender? You got to be kidding me or can we say a wealthy daughter of modern world is noble but illiterate who doesn't know anything? Point is Female protagonist is shrewd and seduces her brother patiently but perfectly engraving herself into his heart.Another aspect of the novel is that the story is filled with lot of superstition believes where each character fate is decided by the divination of a monk. If it really is what the belief says then look clearly transmigrator is definately stealing the luck of villain bcz after she transmigrated, she started to use the tactics according to plot to make everything favorable towards her before that everything was fine, but we can also cannot oblivigrate the villain's deed that shows her selfish desires which makes her nothing but a laughing joke.As for the male protagonist, he is strong and obviously wise but it is really a shame to say that he is s*upid in terms of understanding emotional intelligence when it comes to heroine. Firstly he found warmth in heroine which he has never found in her mother and burden of entire family has on his shoulder so he overwhelmed with the care showed by her 'sister' with added guilt of her broken legs.Then he disregarded his responsibilities to find her biological sister by casually searching and taking a whole four years which perfectly used by author to sculpt the original heroine i.e Shen Miao Qi to become a bad person and pave the way for Yu Xiang's bright future with some interference of a (villain) Miao Qi which will highlight the heroine (Miao Qi). Back to the hero, Seduced by her sister, hero who was living in an ancient era and still not knows how to keep a certain distance with heroine is quite laughable.To sum up all, author has done a poor work in reasoning with each 'innocent' action of hers and making the hero looks quite s*upid which does not make him fit with the word 'intelligent'.
