- #1
I love the story. The beginning is top notch. Not the start, the start is a bit disturbing. The twins certainly have ambiguous feelings for each other, especially the brother. So far, I suspected the ML is actually the reincarnation of the twin brother, which is... Disturbing, but ignore that.My complaint about this novel is while the ML is devoted, he's... How do I say this? He emits the aura of child groomer? I mean, the FL is partially at fault for always sticking to him, but I sometimes have to skip a certain scene when it becomes too much. He's 20 and the FL is 14. 6 years age gap which is not at alot but... It's a lot when the younger side is below sixteen.And he could be really frustratingly careless about MC's opinion when it comes to changing their identity from brother-sister to something else. His disregard triggered a fight or flight instinct for me and I pity the real brother of the original body because the ML is a possessive freak for not wanting to have him interact with his biological sister. That point makes me dislike the ML a little bit. Would have been 5/5 if the ML didn't change into a freak around 80+ chapters. Everytime he appears I either sit languidly waiting for a good show or bracing a subtle s*xual harassment from ML to FLSpoiler
Dude slapped his 14-y/o little sister's bu*t shamelessly (and repeatedly) while knowing fully well she's 14 and not his sister. While the dude is 20/21 already. I'm disturbed.
[collapse]I think that's all. The ML kinda went a bit downhill but not in an unexpected way. Like, deep down I know he could be like that. So, yup 4/5. Originally it's around 3.5/5 because I'm disturbed with the ML but then I realized I need to be objective.The author did well to install interesting side characters but rarely showed their lives outside the FL even though their luck is the product of FL's luck. It sucks Spoilerbecause I found myself expecting a scene about the dragon-phoenix twins of the crown prince but they don't even appear much.
[collapse]The story is really focused on the FL, her face-slapping, and the og!FL's bratty scenes. It's a missed opportunity.