The Villain Who Became Pregnant With The Alpha’s Child Chapter Completed Discussion

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It's a nice story. ABO but no sa involved which is always a plus.

I do agree that at first ML sounds more like a villain instead but I do get MC getting over it. After all he doesn't have the Og's memory so he doesn't care much about what happened between them all before he got there.

Honestly their personalities are very stereotypical. The cold but caring super rich "ceo" and the poor but prideful and resilient "heroine". Nothing really special.

The story is a solid 3 but upped to 4★ because they don't use the abo background to justify "inevitable" seggs/marking/bonding. MC aint grudded, ML don't "lose control", no drama.

I would have liked to see a bit more of the abo backgroung in the story tho, it doesn't say much about how things work and could be a bit more detailed. There's also a couple things that don't get explained well enough and don't make much sense leaving the sensation of plotholes.

At least the baby is cute. But I think I'd enjoy more to read a story about the side couple.

On what bothers me:

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The grandma and how she knows so many important people and how they respect her so much. Sorry, no matter how good her food is it makes no sense. On that note... same kinda applies to MC. It makes sense the Og2nd ML wanting to hire him and go learn from grams too, but it doesn't make sense that his food basically cured OgOmegaMC of his eating disorder...

The bunch of loose ends that are left... what happened to ml's half sister? What happened in the political end? The 2nd couple got together or not? Weren't they gonna make a second more proper engagement ceremony/party? It's a lot of small things... some important some not but that would be nice to have a closure on.

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Lastly... it's a shame that it's mtl but it's better than nothing.
 
  • #2
oh if I could give you more stars I would. I absolutely loved this book! could not stop reading. definitely recommend it. wish the ending was not so rushed and more of Nikos pov but still was super great read! will be looking for more of your books.
 
  • #10
I love the storyline of this book.  I feel a roller coaster of emotions here while reading. I love the characters so much and how the story flows. I wish and hope for a happy ending for all the characters! Thank you, Author. ...️
 
  • #12
lots of repeating, unbelievable storyline
 
  • #13
Yes he is. His trying to make her realize she's not a heartless person. I can understand she's tired of people hurting and using her. But she's better than that. He should tell her everything that's going on. So she understand more. Also they should admit their feelings. Quit running from each other
 
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