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Somewhat generic and predictable so far.Main character is basically omnipotent even though there are a few downsides after transmigration (vocal chords thingy of possessed person is for one, even though it did not cause any setbacks), so there is not much of character building/growth. Interactions with others are stereotypical, really bad characters are single dimensional. Possessed person background is vague and I start to feel it is intended to suddenly reveal random facts to cover plot holes later.There is no question "will MC win here?" because she never suffers losing in any arc. That said, there is a little bit of intrigue here and there, but it is very simplistic and often wrapped up in just a few chapters. Some events are quite forceful rather than natural for storyline progression.Also, at chapter 70 girl group is not formed yet so I guess main story is not even started. In this sense story development and pace is slow.Not related to novel itself: translation on Fenrir lacks editing in many chapters: he/she mistakes in the same paragraph, usual MTL problems with names. Sometimes it is difficult to follow story.
