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This novel is alright I guess.Let's start with the main character first. Ngl, this novel's protag is quite different from other novels, and that might turn some of you off. The main character is an alpha at times, but also an extreme beta when in front of female characters. In other words: he's a massive simp. Now then, let's move on to the side characters. Just so you know, there is an ungodly amount of lolis so you should watch out for that. *Cough* Ok, the side characters aren't really anything to look forward to honestly, and there are also some that are just plainly annoying (hint: hero). I also don't like how the author makes completely s*upid characters and then tries to justify these completely s*upid characters, it's honestly very annoying.Ok, then unto the world-building: the author seriously needs to stop being lazy and write an at least decent world-building. The world-building on the skills department is very unstable. Like with the sword mastery, for example. Yuki didn't improve his swordsmanship despite his swordsmanship reaching level 7, which is only 3 levels behind the max level, and he still kept swinging his sword like an amateur, which is annoying.Demon arc rant: The entire demon realm arcs are forced. The demons found out that Yuki's the demon lord, despite Yuki never using his wings and actively hiding his identity when he's fighting in the beginning arcs. There's also the problem with the side characters, as none of the new ones introduced in the demon arcs are likable. This entire arc is just a mishmash of forced stuff and annoying characters, making it extremely frustrating to read.And it's not just the demon arcs, a lot of the later arcs are also very forced, like the one with Lyuu's father, like: how the hell did Lyuu's father found that Lyuu's working as a maid in Yuki's castle? I'm pretty sure Lyuu didn't went to any civilization after he met Yuki.But the translation of this novel is one of the best though.Also:#NirvashHeadpat#JokerHeadpat#TentacleHeadpat#EveryoneHeadpat
