A Demon Lord’s Tale: Dungeons, Monster Girls, and Heartwarming Bliss Chapter 18 Discussion

  • #1
Horribly bland and this author's writing style doesn't work well for me. I actually disliked all of the characters. Even the dragon girl, a setting I always LOVE, made me kinda irritated. The interactions between the MC and the characters are dull and unrealistic even for a slice of life. It's pretty much just another slice of life novel but somehow they're in a fantasy world this time around. The dragon girl is quickly seduced by food with no real developments shown and then she acts and is treated like just another young and weak girl. The next girl is just boring and overdone to try to make her "cute", making her feel artifical.

The MC is really hard to like. He's truly inept at pretty much everything and has no real grasp on his own situation. He's pretty much below average in intelligence. He always complains about this or that and the author is using him to state his own opinions on stuff, even real life affairs. His talent at things are minimal at best and he can't imagine any good magic despite being from the modern world and one who liked playing games. The best stuff he managed to imagine was a flamethrower which was decently powerful, but after losing control of it a little, he somehow got a trauma and now he can't use it anymore. The magic in this world is just about imagining, as long as you can imagine it clearly, it'll work. Despite this, the MC can't imagine anything good, which is ridiculous. The dragon was interesting at the start, but she just turned into a normal gluttonous shut-in instantly. Giving it a 3/5 is pretty generous of me.

I don't recommend this.
 
  • #3
at least give ten chapters to read before you have to stop and rate
 
  • #4
love the 1st book and this one. couldn't help but get glued till am done with the chapters. will there be a 3rd book?. hope it will be a series..'the Lycan series'???
 
  • #5
This story has great potential, but it is all over the place. It seems like the author had a bunch of ideas and wasn't sure how to make it work. Lots of contradictions, forgetting certain details, confused character development, unclear references regarding pronouns, etc. It just didn't flow.
 
  • #6
Oh wow! I loved the 1st book but this is another level. love love love from beginning to end how it all came together for them both. can't wait to start the 3rd xxx
 
  • #7
Sometimes i think mark is super bastard. But at the same time i prefer Summer with Mark... damnnn
 
  • #9
This book is a very enjoyable read however there still could be more to the story. But I still enjoyed reading it
 
  • #11
The best. I was initially not sure why king Alejandro had another story but in this case it made sense as it will help mold the future legacies... I love this book and really enjoyed it. King Al is honestly my fave.
 
  • #12
The story wasn’t bad but it was advertised as free yet when I get to a certain point y’all tell me I have to pay over $50 to get the rest???? No thanks, that’s what we call a scam. I can buy real books for less, smh.
 
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