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The TL did a great job, even if it was a touch difficult to understand who was talking sometimes (there was a lot of wordy bits that I frankly don't think is the TL's fault at all!) Story: 9/10 Would be a 10 if it had the ending I wanted but I'm just selfish like that.Characters: For a short story, surprisingly well written. At least my smooth-brain was able to get attached to the characters fairly quickly.Please keep in mind that you need to have (as always) a suspension of disbelief to get into it. Read the tags, read the first chapter; you'll get what I mean.Totally worth a read if the listed tags are your thing.
