- #1
Rating: 3
- Story pace is a little too slow.
- Villains are idiotic and superficial considering they're supposed to be at the top of their hierarchy. You'd think a queen would be capable of manipulations above highschool mean girl level. Spoiler
It looks like there is one who's more intelligent than a monkey but it looks like it's heading straight to 'you're interesting let me simp for you - territory'. It also looks like we have an extra annoying c*ckroach that'll have to get stomped on later which is annoying, to say the least. It's an uninteresting plotline.
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- Villains are idiotic and superficial considering they're supposed to be at the top of their hierarchy. You'd think a queen would be capable of manipulations above highschool mean girl level. Spoiler
- ML is alright. A bit of a hypocrite in that he denies his feelings for the MC because he's choosing to remain forever single because of a kid he met once, but who isn't? His interactions with people besides the MC are hilarious but I'd like more information into why they've followed this man aside from the fact that he's: (a) the prince, (b) not an as*hole like wicked stepmom, and (c) he's wicked strong. Because those are the basics of every ML ever. I want to know what makes him different, but I can also handle if he's just generic.
- The Supporting Characters are fun, not annoying, although some worship the MC because of ridiculous misunderstandings. They are overall, bending their neck backwards for MC - I can't blame them for that though. But the story could use more dimension from the characters surrounding the main ones.
- She should have been able to solve all of her problems so far without her ability. It's not that hard when you live in a world that's this far in technology compared to the era she currently resides in.
- The story has become predictable in a sense that she has to rely on a vision for the solution when a user was able to predict it. (Chapter 166, User: Feyliya on Sept. 19, 2022. "I think Aristine is about to reinvent recycling.")
- Her EQ is all over the place. There is a very big correlation to politics and social interaction. This is where her visions should have been used more as she was (it gets revealed early on) imprisoned for around ten years. Her ability does not equal to that of a TV, and with how infrequent her visions are, it doesn't make sense how she's able to maneuver situations to her advantage when she turns as dense as bedrock the next chapter.
- Her denial and reluctance to admit helping people is one of her driving forces for her decisions remind me of Cale from TCF, though not as well written.
