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Translation is nauseating to read.
Back in the Cafe. The director was reading the new script notccarriag about constant buzzing. Once he was done, he stopped tapping the table and picked up the phone "hello"The above is what any sensible people would write.But this story> In a Cafe, a man was sitting. It was director sun. His fingers were tapping the table making a *tap* *tap* *tap* notice. > He was reading the the script that has been written again. *bzzzz* bzzzzz* He was ignoring his phone. Because he was fully deeply going through the newly written script page by page. > He could no longer ignore the ringing so he picked up the phone. He attended the call and said "hello"Like, who the.. who writes like that? Ai could tighten & improve phrases like this by a 1000% this what ai is for. Please use it. The concept & content & scenes are great. And the fact you are talking the time to translate it is beyond beautiful. But... it would be perfect if you took the small effort to make it read/flow better. & remove the junk words & paragraphs
