Top Stream Business Chapter 30 Discussion

  • #1
I'm only to chapter 30 but think I will stop for now. If I rated it right now it would be a 2.5 at most, the story is just boring.

I would categorize this as slice of life, not much happens. The begining he finds the diary Spoiler

which is just his name repeated on each page so a little weird. He figures out that he means more to the ML than he thought and is randomly reborn. I was under that assumption he figured out ML liked him more than a little brother, but 30 chapters in and it's just MC being taken care of and spoiled by ML. No facing feelings, no MC trying to figure out his feelings, no ML making advancements just ambiguous atmosphere.

Chapter 28 they go to a movie together and ML lightly touches MC's shoulders which is enough for MC to not pay attention to the movie and blush the when time. 🙄

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MC doesn't seem rebirthed at all, he isn't more mature, doesn't remember things from college the first time around and his character is just bland. He is just too spoiled by ML.

ML is typical cold tyrant. He does use emojis with MC though, so that's cute. He just spoils and takes care of everything for MC more like a servant than a potential equal partner.

I'm down for stories that have light drama, no anst and lots of fluff but this one just doesn't seem to have a clear direction or goal. I might pick it up later if it ever gets translated. MTL is okay but the story isn't worth trudging through.
 
  • #4
I have skipped reading this book several times bc the description didn't capture me. But wow, was I wrong! I think this one is one of Muses best books (besides alpha alejandro ofc) This book reminds me of Sarah J. Maas, only way sexier.  Love all the mythical creatures, the world you build up! thx
 
  • #5
Hello, Author. Your story is so fantastic. I love watching it. I am an autohr from Indonesia. Do you mind if i translate your story to indonesian? I thought many readers from indonesia love your story too.
 
  • #6
Thanks for the 3 chapters in a row! Annabelle is absolutely criminally awful.  Some evil insanity in her to add peanuts to a gift & give it to a pregnant Elena.
 
  • #8
I LOVE this book but I stopped reading it because I wasn’t ready to finish it. Was hoping there was going to be a sequel or something so I could finish the book
 
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