Peerless Genius System Chapter -- Discussion

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  • #10
I just read the first 7 chapters and I'm completely hooked. I can't wait to read what's to come. How much trouble will this pair get into? Will they cause a lot of ruckus? What difficulties will they find on their way to their HEA?
 
  • #11
I can’t wait for the chapter. I don’t know how often the author updates but hope I don’t have to wait too long to see what happe to Ashley and Sinclair
 
  • #12
the story is nice but the grammar and sentence structure are terrible
 
  • #13
Thus far, I've enjoyed the story. Although, I have a couple suggestions. First, spell check is a good thing. In nearly every chapter, there is, at least, one misspelled word. The other suggestion is; Try to improve on your punctuation. I've noticed errors there, as well. Fantastic story though.
 
  • #14
Loving it so far...I'm confused a lil too did I miss V's age? Or is chase not 18 yet?
 
  • #16
Muse, this book is awesome, as are all that you have written. Thank you so very much and keep up the great work.
 
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