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Aight. Another novel without an ounce of logical approach or reasoning in it. Unless you have strong masochistic urges it's hard to continue reading. We got a naive MC. A pushover that anyone could take advantage of. I might continue this if there's character growth in the story but there doesn't seem to be so nah, nope. Also the MC is a bit s*upid, she keeps acting naive unnecessarily, so many unsavory scenario that could've been avoided but because she keeps acting like a timid jumpy stuttering mess of a little girl (despite being an adult already), the people starts to look down and underestimate her.Normally you would feel sorry for MC's plight but rather I felt annoyance and irritation instead. The treatment she got is what comes if you lack self-respect. Definitely one of the kinds I hate the most.I saw Yuri so I expected some kind of boyish MC. As well as looking at the title as well as the tags, I expect good things from the MC but the very beginning is about MC being pushed around and getting into bad situations because she keeps acting like a pushover.It's s*upid and very cliche trope where ALL people around the MC are for some reason EVIL, BULLY, SCUM, APATHETIC, ARROGANT and ironically only the MC had a Saint personality. This definitely one of the most annoying trope, just because the MC is the MC of the story everyone wants to mess with the MC which doesn't make f*cking sense at all.One of the worse this novel has was it's villains, they don't possess proper thinking process. They're completely one dimensional and only thinking and doing things for the sake of being "villain" without proper reasoning, it doesn't matter if they won't gain anything from it, it doesn't matter whether it's something they want or not, they'll still do it, they're doing their best to do villainous things just for the heck of it. There's nothing grand complain about it aside from saying it's a complete lazy writing. In some tr*sh chinese novels some villain characters just happen to bump shoulders with the MC, then the villain suddenly want to mu*der the MC. It's unreasonable but there's the whole "Bump shoulder" accident that causes it. But in this novel there's nothing like that! Author was like.. "Yeee I waaaant sooome actiooooons.. Leeeeet's inseeeert soome villaaaainsss!".. So author proceed to make a villain to mess with MC and the villain felt 'genuinely' angry and he wants to mu*der MC. Reason?? No reason!! He's a villain made by author, he just need to do the job. Reason and Logic can go fvck themselves. Yep! Lazy fvcking writing, I say.Story: 1/5 Style: 2/5Concept: 2/5Characters: 1/5I don't need to read more to understand that I won't like this one.
