Provocation Chapter Completed Discussion

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  • #1
The master and mad dog dynamic here is TASTY the shou is very close to losing it throughout the story. Lashing out on the gong in the way that actually hurts is like a balm to my soul... Always love it when the shou knows where to hurt.

Story progression is so-so (it's only 7 chapters after all) but like I said, the master and mad dog relationship is worth the read.
 
  • #2
Michael be like: its my revenge time and takes out gun
 
  • #3
con. p2, How appropriate is John's wolf named Irving? Laughed at that twist of humor. ; )  % )   : 0
 
  • #4
Wow, this is an exciting story! Keep writing, we want more chapters! :)
 
  • #7
Great job author, I love this and I give you my support
 
  • #8
Don’t even get started. It’s several books and authors thrown together in half-a**ed never ending story.
 
  • #10
This book was really interesting start to finish! I was hooked on it, great book! Thank you for taking your time on it!
 
  • #13
Really excited. Love her Mafia stories. Keep it up author make it more darker than before.
 
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