World’s Fastest Level up! ~As a Result of the Awakening of My Incompetence Skill [Transfer Within Dungeon], I Became the Strongest Without Being Restricted by the Rules of the Dungeon~ Chapter 173 Discussion

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.......... hm... I'm troubled with how to write the review... cause for me this novel seriously have many flaws.

1st lack of world building

about the [Game Elements, Level System, Dungeons] in this novel... frankly from this alone that really~ seriously~ lack of world building. is already bad. there's no clear information about the world state.

"It's been 20 years since dungeons suddenly appeared in the world."

"Humanity got supernatural powers like Level, Status, and Skill."

only that, no info about the setting, trend, law, etc about the current world that changed massively.

the author just bulldozing all of that and focusing on MC, without subtly inserting any information about the world.

not only that, theres no character traits when the author introduce characters. (no info about his hair color, length, Eyes color, Body Type, feature, etc... NON!!! no information to feed our imagination how that character look like! ヽ (o`皿′o) ノ) Spoiler

only in volume 3 that author begin to include the character traits on a FEW character, but that's too late...

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2nd the title is a massive LIE!!!!

[Without Being Restricted by the Rules of the Dungeon]?

thats a massive BULLSHIT!!!! HE STILL RESTRICTED!!!! (ノಠ益ಠ) ノ彡┻━┻

he only utilize a loophole in the rules. what a letdown

Spoiler

『You have captured this dungeon for a specific number of times』『You won't get any reward for capturing this dungeon in the future』

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he still can't crack that rule. and honestly with him can't do anything about it, that can't be called [Grinding] in the truest sense.

with that restriction his [Accelerated Growth] only shine when he chase the top. when he start heading the top his growth will lose the brilliance.

Spoiler

with him only gain bonus level in new Dungeons, and with unknow Dungeons spawns, his growth rate will seriously stalled

[collapse] unless, the author want to makes apocalypse with Dungeon spawns all over the place at high rate.

and for [Awakening of My Incompetence Skill]

the 1st & 2nd awakening is acceptable but for the 3rd, his Conditional Power is really not worth the price... and not only that, a few of his skill/power have inconvenient activation condition or ridiculous cost... it's like already in nerfed state.

so for me thats still Incompetence.

as if that not enough....

Spoiler

he's not the only one that not affected by intermission

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so the premise of [World's Fastest Level up] is gone too -_-

.... so... is there's any uniques in the title anymore?

3rd reek of shounen plot armor

.... yeah personally I really hate this type... without any basis, just with willpower & courage, he will overcome any crisis that come his way with OP plot armor. (maybe theres some reader that like this type but this novel deliver it in a really bad way that its give me cringe)

drop it -_-
 
  • #6
I'm so obsessed with these stories but then I almost lost my patience. 3 chapters per day? Hays pls Max Charming. Upload more chapters!
 
  • #7
Not a bad story at all, the characters would good, the beginning definitely got me hooked
 
  • #8
very interesting hope it turns out great . loving it so for
 
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