World’s Fastest Level up! ~As a Result of the Awakening of My Incompetence Skill [Transfer Within Dungeon], I Became the Strongest Without Being Restricted by the Rules of the Dungeon~ Chapter 165 Discussion

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The story takes place in modern world where dungeons, monsters and status appeared randomly. It follows the initial struggle of our MC who had awakened to such a skill which was initially thought to be a dud but after one year of struggle to level it up sufficiently it becomes a skill that removes a huge limitation and allows our MC to level up at a incredibly fast rate. However that doesn't mean that he has a easy time conquering dungeons and defeating opponents. On the contrary, despite having such a ridiculously growth rate, he often times fights against opponents who have a much higher level than him or is much more buffed up, which causes him to grow in multiple ways. The author does give sufficient detail about the dungeon and monsters our MC encounters when he is going to a difficult dungeon for the first time but because of his skill the MC clears a single dungeon many times so only the first entry is described hugely by the author which prevents the novel from being tedious. Imo, it is novel that is suitable fast paced and enjoyable to read in your free time.

However it has some short comings, one of them being that I feel like the author could improve the world building by a bit but for me the biggest flaw would be the character Claire. She is literally that stereotypical character that for some reason is ridiculously powerful and is also around MC's age. To further validate my point, the skill of our MC prevents him from being affected by a weekly cool down after clearing a dungeon and as its name suggest in the synopsis, it allows him to transfer anywhere in a dungeon. So basically he can enter a dungeon, teleport to boss room and kill it repeatedly for the dungeon clearance rewards. Which makes his growth rate of about 270+ levels in a day. Yet, Claire for some reason is still over level 100000 despite being equal in his age and to chapter 165, the author has given no reason other than her being special. I have no qualms about introducing a character to stimulate and motivate the MC even more but the problem lies that the character is extremely generic, like how she uses ice magic, has silver hair, s*upidly overpowered for no reason and somehow easily opened upto a little to our MC despite knowing him for less than a month.

If the author fixes these issues in the later chapters, I will update the rating to 5*
 
  • #4
Smh… I can't with Aunt Lydia. You lost your brother but Cleo? She lost her entire family!!! You can't compare the two.

He was your brother, he was cleo’s father.
 
  • #5
This book is Soo good, very interesting plot and the drama is ??mind blowing. Best book I've come across❤️ Keep it up❤️❤️
 
  • #9
Don't mind if this story goes for thousands chaps cos am so in love wt Nicole! If only all the wives of son-in-law stories have half of her characters.. haha. Anyway good job author!!
 
  • #11
Merry Christmas to all of my readers!  Thank you so much for reading and loving my books! Because of you, my husband and I were able to treat our children to a great morning!   hope everyone stays safe and healthy!   I will have a new book out on GoodNovel in January so stay tuned!
 
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