Gradually Reaching Paradise Chapter -- Discussion

  • #1
Once again, the author and their heavy plot and background! My glossary is already filled and we haven't even found the main conflict yet 🤣

The author deserves every penny of your support. At this point I'd buy everything with their pen on it 👏

Okay, so it starts slow--beeeery slow with laying all the background, which is massive. Compared to the Author's first novel, the comedy's not so obvious though still exists. The atmosphere feels more "solemn", or perhaps I've not read enough chapters. The narration is done better than Shadowless Night, it captivates you with the details--the beautiful scene, the nature of the characters, the fleshed-out gory details. You get me? Fleshed-out? 🤣It can get boring and overwhelming for some people, but each chapter consists only 1.6-2k English words, so although it might seem long, it isn't, truly.

I'd say you give this a try because it's my choice of pro-
 
  • #7
1000+ chapters & still dragging. Very disappointing character developments & no revelations yet. Even the subplots are boring & repetitive w/ all these other guys chasing Rosalie. She has become an unlikeable FL. There's no excitement & romance. More scenes should be written between Rose & Byron.
 
  • #9
i refer this story to everyone because the story is so amazing and it so great. I salute the author for the nice piece like this❤️
 
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