Zhuolu Chapter 92 Discussion

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  • #10
I can’t wait for more chapters to this book. It’s really getting good.
 
  • #12
I think it started out interesting but the female character had nothing that made the reader want to relate to her or root for her.  Had to stop after about seven chapters.  Too infuriating to read.
 
  • #13
Do not make the stories you write too long. It becomes boring. The storyline becomes redundant   And readers lose interest. Stay on the main storyline and characters. Do not divert the storyline either. And most especially do not divide a whole days event into 2 or 3 chapters.
 
  • #14
another captivating book! Mancini's Bride is my favorite. Love how you keep the first characters active while another story comes into your series. Excellent writing as always. impatiently waiting for a new chapter for Vincenzo and Clair /Cindy. Always loved Cindy. Love how her story is unfolding.
 
  • #15
I love this series and author. She has a fantastic storyline for everyone that keeps you intrigued and waiting on the edge of your seat to know what happens next
 
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