Super Card System Chapter 13 Discussion

  • Thread starter RykerBale
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Translation & Edits:

Needs good editor since translation is wack! Wrong choices of words make the flow of the story awkward. It's readable but irritating for me. If you're okay with machine translation and do not care about grammar then you're good to go since the translation is better than the mtls one.

Story:

So for the story, I don't know if it's good or bad.
 
  • #3
I have read all 3 books. It’s took me months and god knows how much money. But I tell you it was worth it. These should be published and sold!
 
  • #4
nice..its very interesting..i enjoy this book story..thanks for the chapters
 
  • #5
what agreat book. kept me till late at night.  thanks  lisa
 
  • #6
Before Author made Blake an idiot because of Elise. now the FL has become an idiot as well...just to drag the storyline! It's very disappointing!
 
  • #9
Loving this series! Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the updates.
 
  • #11
excellent book, to the writer good job please publish more of your books. looking forward to it
 
  • #12
I was thoroughly enjoying this book but then I have to wait days at a time for 1 more chapter. It is so disheartening.
 
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