Becoming the Male Lead’s White Moonlight Chapter 35 Discussion

  • #1
It's pretty average, not sure why the other reviews are so high.

Plot is okay, but the author doesn't seem to plan the timeline very well, there were too many unimportant events which made the 1st arc a bit too long for a quick transmigration novel, so the author ended up rushing the ending of the arc which made it very underwhelming. It's disappointing how few details there were for the villains' endings. There were also some illogical parts which obviously showed that the author didn't do her research much.

Throughout the 1st arc, the author keeps writing details on how beautiful the MC was, and how s*xual attraction the ML have towards the MC which is extremely annoying. Once or twice is fine but it's almost in every chapter. In the end I dropped it in the 2nd arc because there seem to be the same pattern which is excessive amount of details on MC's beauty. Another reason I dropped it is because I hate entertainment circle plot, whenever it's related to the entertainment circle, it always have live broadcast, netizens' commentary, scolding, etc.. It's repetitive and boring.
 
  • #2
Read the new chapters today. Very happy to continue the journey. I hope you are well! Isincerely enjoy your writing and this story.
 
  • #5
Waiting for more update….it’s a good read......
 
  • #7
I need a part 2!!!! Did Santiago find Freya? did Killian tell Arabella about her parents?
 
  • #10
Janedoewritings owns the mafia romance genre..all her books are chefs kiss....I highly recommend
 
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