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Really not sure why so many gave this a 5 when this is 2 star material at best. There's absolutely no build up to the foolish fiance and the nobledick's downfall. They're already set to fall as of chapter 10 and I suspect that they'll be out of the story completely by chapter 25. The betrayal premise was clearly just bait for all the people who get hard-ons from seeing people suffering. The chapters following our titular character, Leaf, are written extremely simplistically. To put it in a different way, boringly. The chapters following the idiot duo are only marginally more entertaining than Leaf's, but like I said, they'll be gone by chapter 30 at the latest, so that entertainment value won't even last much longer.The good novels in the "revenge" genre usually have the traitors' descent to ruin as endgame, and we get to see the MC's journey to make that happen as the buildup, and their happy life is the after story. When it all happens in the very first arc, it's a sign that maybe the author should have chosen a different career path.To wrap this review up, I'll just say that you can read up to chapter 30 to watch the fools fall if you're into that (I'm not), but drop it immediately after. I'm dropping this now because it's just written poorly and I'm not a sadist.
