A NEET’s Guide to the Parallel World: Healer, the Strongest Cheat? Chapter 351 Discussion

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I finished reading the raw using google translate and at best I gave this novel 3.5 / 5.0

The first half of the story was good at first there was proper pacing for events, a decent build-up for the story's plot points, and the story was taking a logical advance.

The MC was enjoying his another-world life and I enjoyed reading it.

The second half of the story really went to the garbage hole there was no more pacing or build-up instead the story just jump from one event to another, I no longer know where the plot is going and no longer enjoy reading any of what the MC or the other characters are doing nor do care,

from the second half to the ending, it was like Guilty Crown all over again if you watched the anime that how I felt about reading the web novel.

after finishing the story I find many things I was dissatisfied with:

    1. the author introduces some elements like Class rank-up and potions, but I haven't read a single thing about these elements since he introduced it neither the MC nor any other character mange to get a Class rank-up or use any potion in the entire story, these are some of the elements the author introduces and never use there are more elements in the story which I would like to see more use for in the story or to know more about it.
    1. the MC meets some really high-level characters not as high-level as him but at the very least when you read about them for the first time you would expect to see them again later in the story.
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like when the MC meets a LV 300 red dragon that the MC help with returning his stolen jewel (was it) the dragon saying he will return the favor but to never see him again or the party or three who manage to corner the MC during the final war but they get rekt by him and you don't know much about them you don't even get some back story nor enough information to actually feel their weight in the world of the story

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3. Not enough back story for the MC, the MC gets his back story mentioned briefly in one chapter but every other character get at least one dedicated chapter, even when the MC was getting his revenge on his classmates I didn't feel good about it or if he was really deserving to do what he did to them nor did I felt bad for his classmates' except three of them because their back story made me feel at least sympathy for them.

4. The ending was bitter-sweet but what the flipping hell with this ending

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I read 351 chapters of this novel just for the MC Thanos snapped himself out of existing to rest the world, he did give a better life to all the 4 girls in his party member and he did change the world to a better place by the 4 nudges he did to their lives and made it closer to his ideal world, but the Mc that got summoned after the reset and the MC that I read from the beginning to end before the rest are not the same even after the Mc see the memories about the life he had before the rest he can't feel any relation to the MC before the rest

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hopefully, the Light novel would do better, I'm fine with changing the entire plot after the MC leaves the first city he's in.
 
  • #2
I love this book almost as much as His Sweet Bella. Can’t wait for Nate’s story!!...️...️
 
  • #6
Am usually reluctant to read books that have lots of chapters but this one has very short chapters and never cost that much.
 
  • #8
you uploaded this book 2 times . I have two of this book in my library. I have one that stopped at chapter 63 weekend and there also another one that stopped at  chapter 127. And please, try not to make this mistake again.
 
  • #11
4 stars, a good story, good pacing, enjoyable but I'm not sure if it's been translated into English as there are some things that should be picked up in editing (misgendered personal pronouns, strange phrasing etc) throughout which can make it difficult to read without frustration at times
 
  • #12
Congratulations!!! It is getting more interesting...waiting for the next chapters
 
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