A NEET’s Guide to the Parallel World: Healer, the Strongest Cheat? Chapter 34 part1 Discussion

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This web story is awful.

At the beginning of the novel, our protagonist commits su*cide Spoiler

for revenge because he recognizes the shallowness of his classmates and is repulsed

[collapse] and succeeds but does not die because of the Deus Ex Machina powers of the hero summon.

Then, once he is isekaied to a new world with his classmates, a terrible princess finds him weak and sends him to an unbeatable dungeon (Hmm.. deja vu - didn't that black cat just pass by earlier Touka?). Whereby, he enters a cave of wonders and happens upon the ultimate power and the ultimate treasures becoming the one - an all powerful Gary Stu.

Once out of the dungeon, his animal magnetism attracts a harem of cardboard cut- um women whom can't help but melt in the rain for our Gary. Spoiler

Heck, the uppity noble family of one of our paper mache divas whom have known Gary for all of one day can't help but push their wayward daughter into Gary's arms. Our Gary is the only man who can ever lead our Ms. Cardboard Knight to the promise land of love and adventure.

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But don't worry, Spoiler

Ms. Cardboard Knight have a solid relationship foundation based upon sword lessons for our incompetent hero. Well incompetent at the sword for one day. Morpheus....I mean the revenge god, downloads all the sword arts and martial arts programs into Gary's head during a dream making him the ultimate sword master.

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Then stuff happens and Spoiler

Gary seeks revenge against the kingdom that summoned him because he was asked too by a secret society that punishes nobles kingdoms for doing bad things.

[collapse] Then, he powers up into Super Saiyan mode causing his eye to turn red. At this point, I could no longer torture myself to follow along....
 
  • #4
the story is so complicated...looking forward on Baby Zetty and Finn happy ending...I'm sure Finn will protect and accompany her where ever she go...
 
  • #6
I'm so looking forward to the next update!!! This book is amazing!!
 
  • #7
Lilhyz you are one of the author here in GoodNovel, All the story that have you written are always the best you never disappoint us, your readers. I hope you the best! this story of Kaleb and Scarlett is reminded me the story of Kaleb parent but have different twist! You're the best Lilhyz.
 
  • #9
really love this book alot!! hope the writer doesn't get affected by the negative comments. just take your time to write the book:) cheers!
 
  • #10
Love it!!!! Why she just have faith in Xavier!? Mates are supposed to love each other no matter what. why start listening to get mother after her lying to her and the family her while life. Is the man in her dreams her grandfather????
 
  • #11
Very Good book. I liked the way his attitude and disposition changes as the book goes on. It kept me hooked until the very end even through the sad parts.
 
  • #13
Great Story! There are a lot of twists and secrets,  but if you follow the story you won't be confused. I can't wait for the updates.
 
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