- #1
I have finished the WN version (upto the raw as they said, confirmed by checking the raw) and only read the first chapter of this LN translation. However, with all the reviews above, it is more than enough to say that this translation of the LN jumps a lot with places and events being messy and hard to keep track of. Just with chapter one alone, I was completely clueless when it jumped from the S-beauties discussion scene to the meeting between Sara and the MC.The pronouns are sometimes flying from male's to female's ones and back within one statement, about one same subject/speaker, with just a few words away from each other.I hope this LN gets a proper translation soon so we can really keep track of this first volume and the upcoming one this December. If anything, I havea feeling this story is very much different than the WN, as it is focusing on the first girl rn, more details than the WN version, and I wish to know all the events around it.
