How To Live As A Writer In A Fantasy World Chapter 138 Discussion

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Well it starts out good. You have to suspend quite a bit disbelief to get in the mindset that MCs books became as influential as the Avengers and then some, the consequences for it are interesting...

I enjoy the waves every new volume makes everytime it drops, but the story itself is kinda boring, I guess is fair to say there's a lot of fanservice with this being a harem and all, it's just the story sometimes feels like it's barely moving at all... I think Koreans call it eating sweet potatoes. Even then it might be a good read but the relationship building stagnates after a while and it all feels more of the same over and over... Author tries to fix this by introducing new characters, since it's a work in progress it might work but idk.

A big problem is the MC his personality is all over the place, he's kinda dense too... Not in the sense of relationships or rather getting a gf, but everything else, those in the know treat him as a genius cause of his books but I keep constantly thinking he's an idiot. He's also supposed to be a history buff but only ever talks about WW2... That'll be as if I wrote a character to be a math genius so I constantly have him go over the multiplication table... If you want a real history buff try the girl from Villainess Turns into a Brocon.

I see ppl praising the s*x scenes, I usually make a point to skip explicit stuff in the non-smut works I read, but I went ahead and read these and... I guess it's fine, could be worse, it's kinda drawn out, I think we've dedicated like 5 whole chapters to very explicit smut and a lot more text to innuendos and talk about it, which is far too much for a novel that went 100+ chapters without it.
 
  • #3
Such a beautiful love story! Ty so much author for your hard work, and dedication to making your novel very much worth the read!!! You are amazing!!!!
 
  • #7
Nooooo don’t leave us like this! Praying to the Goddess for an update lol
 
  • #9
I loved this book, and would highly recommend it (it is a bit dark though but it has nice character development). I can't help but feeling that the ending was a bit rushed. Would have liked a few more chapters on his journey. The author has a great writing style though.
 
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