- #1
It gets tedious after some time. The author style of writing as if he is totally out of idea, he will describe the same event multiple times, its kinda like.. ‘MC stole a pencil’ later on ‘Did you know MC stole a pencil?’ and soon after that ‘Did I mentioned that MC stole a pencil?’ and not long after that ‘I don’t know if you noticed this but the MC stole a pencil’, it gets tedious and annoying very fast.The way I see it, the author is trying to milk the heck out of the very few ideas that he has. It’s not wrong but the way he’s doing it is plain lazy. 3/5 if I’m being generous.
