Lord_Eggie February 20,2025 #11 Very good storyline. A few pronoun wrote but cools be just an oversight. All in all a grey story. I hope you keep writing 0 0 Reply
Very good storyline. A few pronoun wrote but cools be just an oversight. All in all a grey story. I hope you keep writing
The_Last_Native February 20,2025 #12 the story line was good in beginning but now it is messed up 0 0 Reply
