After Having an AI Boyfriend, I Will Never Be Afraid of Sunspots Chapter 58 Discussion

  • #1
The novel itself has an element of slice of life within it. The progression of the story is smooth, the supporting characters seemed realistic, the world building is solid, and I find it interesting due to the settings. The main character is OP, but somehow it did seemed a bit 'mary sue'-ish because of the lack depth in character, such as trait weaknesses, etc. The male lead is adorable, and it is quite cute and funny that he's mostly confused about things. He's also very dedicated and shower the MC with plug-ins and cheat, pampering even while questioning human morals. The romance is gradual though, but it doesn't feel forced.

One example of their interactions:

Spoiler

ML is a deciding factor for the rewards received after a boss fight in a game (remember, he's an AI).

Another character hoping for just a recovery potion.

ML: You just lost a pair of legs and you're yelling? Anyways, just go back to the base and it will return to normal.

MC having 2.5 cm corroded wound on his fingers

ML: Injured finger? It's so serious! Does it hurt so much?! How painful is this?! *pulls out God-level healing potion*

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If you're into action-filled and like conflicts for the purpose of engaging onself, I won't recommend it.

But the major 'major' reason that prompt me on writing a review is because of a supporting character. Chief-in-staff laoshi! Uwaaaaaah! You have my sympathy. Huhu.

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Edit: Currently at around 90 chapters

[Somehow, I can't edit the rating of the story. But if I'm able to, I'll change it to 4/5]

I do feel that the story is interesting and felt fresh but it only reach the 'good' standard and not the 'enticing' standard. I feel like there more to improve, but I don't know how to explain it.
 
  • #2
amazing part ... Elena and Samuel werr about to kiss but tyler came in between ... both were blushing ... Samuel gave chance to Elena improve herself ... waiting for next part ...
 
  • #3
every chapter always ends up making me want more....I love your stories Agatha...will await for next update.....
 
  • #5
It was a good story and flowed really nicely
 
  • #8
Can’t wait for the next chapter. Sad about losing Max. Worried about her family that they had to leave behind. Glad she is listening to Chance and not hassling him.
 
  • #10
when will you update more chapters man... I'm eagerly waiting .. I want to know, Antonio side as well.
 
  • #11
amazing realy love this books and all the others books aswell
 
  • #12
This book is so good and I really wish more chapters could be released daily. I have read likely 50 werewolf stories in several different reading apps, I belive I have been able to finish 3 of them because I lose interest when the story becomes too much. This one is GOLD and I want much more of it.
 
  • #13
I really enjoyed it, but I feel like the plot twists weren't really answered. still a good book thou.
 
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