- #1
The plot writing is very naïve, especially the first arc. The characters are all 1 dimensional with no real personality. The antagonist are so cartoonishly written that it's hard to suspend your disbelief. The story itself is written very matter of factly. "This happened, that happened". It feels like I'm reading a wikipedia article about the summary of the story instead of the story itself at times. There's no depth to the story at all. Translation is not very good either with unnecessary censoring and TN opinion notes interjected directly into the source material as well as lots of grammar mistakes.
