Death Progress Bar Chapter 60 Discussion

the actual story isnt that bad. I just found some parts to be kind of underdeveloped and cringy... considering the MC was a 30 (?) yo guy before his reincarnation

To be honest, my favourite parts of the novel were probably the mc's interactions with his brothers Spoiler

after their reconciliations

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espeically the third brother lol.

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but alas the drama and everything falls apart. I mean it would have been fine if there was some legit reason behind it or what not but like honestly to me he kinda just seems like he's acting spoiled... (and here's where the awkwardness with his actual age comes into play :p)

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i also didnt really like how the author kept going back and recorrecting the memories of the brothers. like "oohhh actually I remeber differently now, the brothers were actually very nice to me". it felt too intentional that they were trying to sway our emotions to sypathize. idk

also... (sorry for this but) I dont really ship the MC and ml? Yes their relationship is nice ig but I dont see the reason for them to be romantically together (other than the fact that the story is a bl lol). like from the ml's view its oh this guy is interesting and seems to care for me, which I suppose makes a bit of sense. but from the mc's view its like ok he likes me so ill like him back??? or maybe its just me :/