kingstarfish February 20,2025 #13 Already hooked! The chapters are wonderfully written and already full of emotions! 0 0 Reply
DaoistbNiRsr February 20,2025 #14 Horrible Grammer problems. But story line is okay. The end is, umm, well not a good way to leave it but it is what it is. 0 0 Reply
Horrible Grammer problems. But story line is okay. The end is, umm, well not a good way to leave it but it is what it is.
looi89 February 20,2025 #15 thanks for ending on a note where I can wait for the next installment. 0 0 Reply
