Seirei Gensouki ~Konna Sekai de Deaeta Kimi ni~ Chapter 85 Discussion

  • #1
Picked it up after reading the manga. Thought the plot was interesting

Sure enough I try to read the WN. The plot is at least the same looking back

Mind you that I'm gonna base my review after reading Arifureta (same genre, but more fun)

It started out interesting just like manga. But this is where the problem starts. He died, yes but after that he transferred to another world and become a boy which his background is UNKNOWN until chapter 50+

Okay fair, not gonna mind that. Its gonna get better, right?

No

Somehow after being a fugitive it become a foodfest and tons of girls coming out of nowhere

I cant believe that there is 1 chap dedicated for cooking class only.

Also, the plot after act 1 is just plain mess. It gets worse at Hero Summoning, which come out of nowhere without any explanation

Im done. I tried giving it a chance after he knew his revenge target. But nope. The author just threw his revenge and replacing his revenge with harem.

Also the MC character is weak and shallow. Which makes it more annoying to read

Here I thought Im gonna get another fun action Isekai WN. But no, after act 1 it just sh** all over. Such a waste of time.

  • I dont know if its the author or the translation but the writing. In some chap you can see writer just repeating something over and over. Which makes this WN annoyingly long when you can just skip most of the part. Seriously, many parts of this WN can be skipped. Even if you skip it you can still get the gist of the things happening in there.
I hope the manga can fix the problem. But I wont get my hopes up...
 
  • #2
Great book. I love the story line and the characters that are couples. Can’t wait to find out what happens next.
 
  • #4
Hello readers This book was in the process of editing. Please point out or ignore the errors you encounter along the way. Thank you
 
  • #5
I love love loved the story, the only problem I have is some spelling issues and wording. Easy enough fix with proof reading! I can't wait to read more of your books!
 
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