Seirei Gensouki ~Konna Sekai de Deaeta Kimi ni~ Chapter 98 part2 Discussion

  • Thread starter CrazyZoneKO
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  • #1
The author tried to write a novel about Gary Stu, her ultimate boyfriend, but realized that it wouldn't actually make an interesting story.

To solve this problem she made Gary emotionally female so he wouldn't be able take basic steps to resolve simple problems.

That took care of the plot because now Gary needs to spend all his time resolving drama which could have avoided with literally by speaking a sentence or two at the right time, however this solution created a new problem of I don't care about any of these characters or their self-inflicted drama any more.
 
  • #2
I just read your blurb and added your book to my library. I can't wait to flip the pages of your book. why is Aroon jealous of Dae I'mma smack him with a baseball bat.
 
  • #3
but u can write a chapter  how  he cared when she was pregnant , if mentioned Laura cafe was indirectly marketed by camelia and lucifer she  got huge profits, and forgot to  mention camelia got to know a  similar girl was sent in her place and Laura house was guarded secretly as camelia stayed there
 
  • #5
Omg! My favorite so far!! Can’t wait for book 5. Maybe a human Luna in this one?
 
  • #6
Can this be a stand alone book ? or d o I have to read the other 1st ?
 
  • #8
I really like the book it's not good storyline and a good plot but I am so tired of waiting for days to read the next chapter because I have to keep reading this book
 
  • #9
Updating my review. For those who are worried about the hundred + chapters, fear not! I don't write very long chapters. This story is about to end and I promise my readers lots of love and no cliffhangers!
 
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