Seirei Gensouki ~Konna Sekai de Deaeta Kimi ni~ Chapter 49 Discussion

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  • #1
A slightly above average story.

Pros:

- MC has strong morals and character

- The countries and people that MC meets along his travels are well fleshed out, so you get a real sense of adventure

-Supporting characters are well developed

Cons:

-MC is too perfect, talented and capable, never relies on anyone for help. Makes it hard to empathize with him

-The author's style of writing is.... not the best. Has too much of a tendency to overexplain things. Basically has a structure where Character says 1 line, followed by multiple lines of explanation from the author (explaining Character's thoughts and/or story exposition), then 1 line from the Character, then explanation, rinse, repeat. It makes for a very dull and detached story. Granted, there are also times where the author stays out of the way and it's mostly just the characters talking. Those times are when the story is at its best.
 
  • #3
I loved this book!!! Want to read it again, but it’s not letting me. ...
 
  • #6
very interesting story. full of twists and turns and suspense. I really love it. bravo.
 
  • #8
love it all ready, can't wait for more love your write muse and all your books
 
  • #9
This novel is so boring and nothing new. The author has 0 creativity! The story revolve around the main character, going to new places to level up, kill all the enemies and move on! The story line is so bad it will shock you for 3days and 3nights! (Author favorite phrase)
 
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