Your Distance Chapter 93 Discussion

  • #1
I like the concept of the story, however MC is not my cup of tea. MC is a straight up brat that’s also socially s*upid. He’s a university student and still goes around being unreasonable and throwing tantrums, he knows people don’t want to be around him because of that but still doesn’t even try to change. MC is the person most people IRL would avoid. ML is also kind of a creep tbh, not to mention he’s honestly an as*hole as a professor, the kind that would ruin your life for a certain period of time.
 
  • #3
Horrible grammar, typos, and mistakes. I don’t mind when a book has a couple of errors, but there’s one every other paragraph. It’s so bad that I can’t even understand what certain sentences mean/are trying to say. Also, the random switches from 1st to 3rd person POV are really annoying.
 
  • #4
don't bother. author is dragging it out unnecessary.
 
  • #5
I like the characters.. grammar can get lost in translation but respect for the work shouldn't.  once edited I think it will sell even better
 
  • #6
I like so much , and hope for new chapter every day, thank u for your hardwork, I really happy to read
 
  • #7
Carmela is a sick fool! The positive thing about the attack though is that Elli and SJ have been officially revealed as a couple....lol
 
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