Your Distance Chapter 90 part1 Discussion

  • Thread starter Narkella
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And again I wonder about the rating... it's just mediocre.

The story is too inconsistent and there wasn't exactly any character growth but white washing and it even felt like switching personalities.

Let's start with ML which is set up as a gentle and steady character without much emotional fluctuations. Yeah and then he is doing his student on the second date and it's a hairs breadth from raping.

I don't get where their feelings stem from. There wasn't really close interaction.

Then there is MC with a rather easy going trouble maker character but also hardworking... but a son of a rich family.... but his father dislikes him for being gay so they fought and MC is living on his own money.... but still speaks with his dead.... but fighting... but totally nice and peachy when they meet?!?!? Uhm... yeah no.. it doesn't work this way.

Then there is that story u-turn around chapter 70... where this unreliable little twit changes instantly to a well learned super ceo son / james bond?!

And at the end he is back to being a dumb trouble maker.

Also the whole novel is strained and weaved through with the writer's Pseudo intellectual bs. Trying to be deep but failing huge.

3 stars at best. Wouldn't recommend.
 
  • #2
it touched my heart deeply....amazing story  Kuch aur next...
 
  • #4
Can't wait to see the Karma that's gon hit Evelyn
 
  • #5
dont really like she dies the end its not really good
 
  • #7
I love this novel very much. though it would be nice to switch it up. nice work, author. please, more chapters
 
  • #8
another awesome story.  just hard waiting for new chapters.   can not wait
 
  • #9
This book keeps me on the edge of my seat and having all three grumpy Alphas and demons appearing from time to time is a real treat!
 
  • #10
What a roller coaster ride! This book was well written and well thought out! Oh and steamy as hell!
 
  • #11
Story is awesome but author should update atleast 4 to 5 chapter instead of 1 chapter infact not even 1 chapter..
 
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