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Slow story with weak dialog. The world is very non-descriptive and doesn't build to anything in my opinion. Feels like a lot of fluf with little substance. While I wont diss the translators for their effort I will give my personal opinion based on reading other translations. To put it simple it needs work. Maybe this is a more complex novel to translate because of the writers choice of words but there are a lot of grammatical mistakes and even when the sentence is correct it often does not fit in with the rest of the paragraph and let not talk about how the paragraphs are broken up. I would suggest getting a proof reader with strong English language skills.While I appreciate their effort in translating I would say their inexperience coupled with the poor story means I can not recommend this at this time.
