Walking in Another World Chapter 103 Discussion

  • #1
It has been mentioned a lot before but, this one really is a wasted potential. The premise is interesting but everything else is a mess. New characters are introduced without any real purpose or, if they do serve some purpose, it is just forced. Same thing with the plot. I have to drop this at c103 despite giving it so many chances Spoiler

In chapter 103, the church and it's believers chases the saint claiming that she is a false saint. This is actually due the the manipulation of a demon who infiltrated the clergy.

Anyways, some nice church people helped the saint escape then MC took her from them and promised to protect her in their stead.

Things happened and the MC ended up disguising an enemy as the saint to sacrifice her so the people would think that they executed the saint.

The demon revealed itself to be behind this and escaped so everyone realized their mistake but it's too late since the saint is dead, or at least the double is.

Now that is all done, the MC CHOSE NOT TO TELL the people who helped the real saint as well as her friends that she is actually alive. Apparently someone mIgHt uSe hYpNo maGIc or tRUtHHH sErUmMmM on them later. Like WHAT THE F*CK!?? Who would do that at this point!? At least who would do it to these people specifically!? Most of the saint's friends weren't even aware that the whole thing went down until it was done. And the people who helped the saint escape were obviously not caught otherwise they would've benn killed as well. Not only that, but the MC have been using magic to soundproof rooms when something important is talked about since before this arc then he just forgets about its existence.

That is some really forced edgy martyr fetish right there!

Now this could be played as a joke or retconned/resolved or they could make up some scenario to make this seem like a really big brain move on the next chapters. But even then it's still bad writing. The fact is that part is so forced I almost called the cops.

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  • #3
I was extremely confused at the end but the book was really good like some are saying until graduation. It became rushed. “””Spoiler Alert”     He has a daughter with someone else but doesn’t know why she left him , duh!
 
  • #5
I'm loving this so far! everything i thought I predicted to happen didn't, which i love, it's not an really predictable story... Sebastian... biggest shock ever but the best one at the same time
 
  • #7
I just love the barren mother giving birth to the CEOs children though I have not gone far in reading it but its perfect the way I saw it
 
  • #8
please please please author don't take  too long separation both Luke and Bianca and their children's because we loose interest we want good and happy moments now Bez it's going boring
 
  • #10
Not enough ratings because you post chapter as you feel like it ! Finish posting the darn thing so we can finish it before starting a new one that will leave us halfway ! Never gave I had to do this when reading it really is ridiculous. Very disapointed
 
  • #11
Very beautiful story I enjoy reading love this book please update more episodes please
 
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