Walking in Another World Chapter 98 Discussion

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Well I'm not gonna say anything new but yeah this story reads like a diary with some lines of dialogue from time to time, which obviously doesn't do anything positive for the story itself.

Due to the writing style everything suffers, all elements feel lacking because of the lack of detail. Plot is very aimless and unintresting, especially because the protagonist is extremely passive. Setting is a typical fantasy world where fantasy things happen ig, it could've been more interesting if was given more attention. Characters are not even described physically so lets not even mention them as fleshed out individuals (I literally forget about more than half of them most times).

But anyway the protags main goal of exploring the world is really nice, he does grow steadily due to an eagerness to learn and his personality is cool ig. But the problem with ambiguos motivations such as his is that the journey to completing said motivation then needs to carry the story. And I've explained everything that makes a story interesting is lacking in this story sooo...

Let's not even mention the harem it's so shallow that I kinda wish the author didn't bother. But other than that the story is alright and the translation is good enough.

I haven't been invested in it and instead just read it when I'm bored and I'm somehow almost at chapter 100, once I catch up I'll propapbly forget about it tho.
 
  • #2
Story is amazing but can’t deal with it keep updating chapters every so often wish they would put the full book up so I could finish it !
 
  • #4
seems like renee will still end of up w/carl, & i'm not liking it, especially after what happened in her previous life. i am waiting for an explanation on why he allowed their daughter to donate her kidney & die. would also like to know carl's reaction upon learning what happened in the past life.
 
  • #5
love it so far, just hate waiting for the updates. hurry please!!!!!
 
  • #6
This book amazing and I can’t wait to finish it!!! I really love Victor, I think he’s perfect for Laura!!!
 
  • #7
I love this book so much! I would keep reading it even though Iv read it 1000 times. But I just found that I have to buy all the chapters again? I love this book so much but I don’t know why I have to buy this all over again.
 
  • #8
Did zee manage to get the after pills? And thankyou for the consecutive updates. They made my day
 
  • #9
I love this book, I was hooked from begin to end. This was an amazing story and I would definitely read again. Great job author ...
 
  • #10
Honestly speaking, author should update this to 18+, the male lead is a psychopath and a rapist.
 
  • #13
so glad this was completed when I started  because I couldn't put it down! can't wait for the next book in the series!
 
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