- #1
Based off of the first 20 chapters, this seems like the kind of story I really enjoy. It reminds me somewhat of Black Tech Internet Cafe System, which is a story I enjoyed greatly. I laughed several times while binge reading the first 20 chapters and I have high hopes for the future.Edit: Chapter 27, as well as some of the previous chapters, have been pretty problematic. I don't know if it's a translation issue, and editing/proofreading issue, or a lack thereof. Regardless, I can't continue to give this five stars after reading chapter 27. There're multiple sentences that just don't make sense and more that are written quite poorly. Here, I'll provide an example, so judge for yourself.1: "Even those who were strong in building a foundation could directly apply to open a sect! Establish Sect Yipin! He was like He Yiming. He still needed to visit Haotian Academy and win the chief after four years before he was qualified to establish a sect."This first sentence in the example makes perfect sense but after that it just goes downhill. The second sentence in particular, I've seen no mention of a Yipin in the story to my knowledge prior to this. Even if I had though, I'm still not certain that sentence would make any sense.In conclusion, I'm docking a star because I can't honestly give something of this quality five stars.
