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Unaware Genius Girl Is Oblivious — I Ran Away From Home And Became An Adventurer Because My Family Did Not Praise Me At All Despite My Efforts In All Areas! Chapter Completed Discussion

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шыф

шыф

  • #1
One of those stories where author has a dumb, but sorta believable reason for MC to run away.

Only for the regret of MC's family to basically only exist in the first 30 chapters after which the white lotus leads them to blaming everyone, but her.

Worst part is Spoiler

The revenge on the family is weak and even worse the white lotus gets helped by MC just because she was the reason MC left her family. Like I get being thankful for that, but she almost got you killed and lied about it.

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Gonna be honest though MC's story is not even good either there's only so many "oh look MC did something again" that you can read before you feel like Author doesn't get we know MC is a genius.

Mainly skimmed MC's parts in the middle and never felt I missed anything.
 
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Korkyros

Korkyros

  • #2
Could really do with some proof reading.   In particular the use of your / you’re ...‍...  If “you are” doesn’t sound right in the sentence you are writing use your.   The tenses are terrible too “please take a sit”.   Lost in translation?
 
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Binx_E

Binx_E

  • #5
An interesting and intriguing story now contradicting it's own previous facts. Definitely giving it up reading. For the sake of twists don't change your initial beliefs and facts.
 
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