O Pretends to be B For The Violent Admiral Chapter 1 part1 Discussion

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I'm not good at english so expect some grammatical errors

The novel is ok. not too good but it's not bad either.

ML has low EQ so you will find him annoying from time to time (in my opinion) . every time ML appears, I always feel like I'm not really seeing a grown-up man but a child, a brat to be exact. sorry not my type of ml. some might find him cute because his a tsundere (which I also like... the tsundere I mean) but I apologize 'cause I find him annoying.

the story is full of cringy and cliche plotlines. Spoiler

example: Kabedon. sigh I don't want to count on how many times they have done it

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I dropped the story halfway so I don't know if Ml's parents finally have a name. and speaking of names, the name Lucas K. Augustine Dior Gucci Prada 〒▽〒... I have no idea if this is just a joke or if it's his real name because again, I drop this halfway. but if this is true I just want to ask why??just why? (TT-TT) . And the netizens/shippers imagination is so wild! Spoiler

the 38cm literally made me stop for a moment just to stare at the wall for about 1 minute 'cause bro... you just saw the afterlife with that size.'◡'

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this word is so funny I have to cover my mouth because it's already midnight and my sister is sleeping next to me இ‿இ lmao Spoiler

Lucas bared his teeth: "No way, how many people were in bed after midnight that night? On the day of the old king's birthday, was the feng sui so good on that day that everyone wanted to mess around and reproduce?" 😭😭

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the reason I drop the novel is because it keeps dragging. and I agree with the other reviewer who said that it is better if it ends in 50-60 chapters. still, if you want to read a light novel you can give this a try. maybe I will pick this up again someday, who knows? :)
 
  • #3
Amazing part love to know how Samuel will meet his dream girl
 
  • #4
Loving the story already, unsual write at this.... ...️...️...️
 
  • #5
This book kept me on the edge of my seat. I didn’t know how it would turn out with certain characters. Another amazing book by Moonlight Muse. I’m ready for more.
 
  • #6
So excited for the second book. Love the story...
 
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I knew she would end up pregnant. So glad she has a friend like Sylvia so she could at least have peace during her pregnancy without others like Julie planning something to get rid of her to get John or the stress of her horrible parents who only care about Shannon or being locked up.
 
  • #10
this is a very good book. it was hard to put down.......
 
  • #12
I love all your books Ms. Cassandra and it's a good thing that I started with the first one \"He's My Alpha\" so I can really follow the flow of the story...and the continuity of it was so amazingly written. I'm thinking after Beta Paul's story will there be one for Alpha Riley? hehe .........
 
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