Assimilating Villains Abilities to Become the Strongest Chapter 15 Discussion

  • #1
It's not bad. It's kinda okay, but the characters feel a bit too... Uninteresting? I would have liked it if they at least made a character death or loss be impactful, or just shown more character depth but (atm) there's none of it. The characters are all bland.

Even worse is that, the MC is not an exception too. He has this whole "bloodlust" thing triggered by survival instinct but then it gets... Resolved in just a few sentences. His "wimpy" personality switches in a flash to "intimidating, cold, emotionless" in just a chapter. It's an awkward and bland way to do things.

Overall, I gave a 3 because of the action scenes and the MC isn't irritating.
 
  • #3
From the first chapter, I was already hooked. Such amazing and thrilling story. John <3
 
  • #4
Hope you plan the best. it's your story after all and we trust you Author. but I just hope they end up together.. I just couldn't make myself hate Tapish.. I never hate him really
 
  • #6
I do love your stories! looking forward for kenzie, kate and kaleb love stories too! please dont make it too long. haha! keep it up! keep safe and God Bless you always!
 
  • #8
Im loving getting to know Kataleya! Always the quiet Nd timid one but there sure is Rossi Fierceness in her!
 
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