HC_Pwnography February 20,2025 #11 loved the storyline! the chemistry between Silas and grace made it So I couldn't look away. 0 0 Reply
NathanCole3387 February 20,2025 #12 Grammar is atrocious. Details are jumbled and change from paragraph to paragraph. Point of view switches randomly. Needs lots of editing 0 0 Reply
Grammar is atrocious. Details are jumbled and change from paragraph to paragraph. Point of view switches randomly. Needs lots of editing
thebiggestdawgzfU February 20,2025 #17 updating chapters is slow.. you should increase the number of chapters uploaded every day.. 0 0 Reply
