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To be completely transparent the chapters are quite short despite it being 1000 plus so you can probably still finish it relatively quickly. The different planes were really either okay or so very boring I don’t know how anyone can finish this in one sitting as it is so gruelling to read.None of the stories were particularly memorable, they were cliche and though I can like cliche stories it was so much more boring and the cliches were just badly done.Our MC has barely any background info and even with that info he is akin to a blank slate with no definable personality traits except being money hungry and it’s not even funny when he is so what is the point of adding that trait for comedic effect if it just falls flat most of the time.The MCs “sense” when it comes to the original main characters is never properly utilised and in the apocalypse arc so far it hasn’t even been mentioned at all. The main character is not particularly smart nor has that charm that makes you love him he has the looks but that is kind of it.The fall on love at first sight thing is so bland that I don’t even get angry cause it should just be a predetermined notion in every arc as it happens in every single one. There romance is so boring and has zero spark so why should I continue if I feel nothing for either of them.The MC might as well marry the system because they have better chemistry then the main couple. The only times the MC is generally funny is when he is interacting with the system so they should leave the bland MLSpoiler
In the illegitimate child arc, I was low-key uncomfortable with how before the ML found they were not related he was really ready to sleep with his brother. He is a predator and it is never addressed like he wanted a minor and was waiting for the MC to hit 18. Wild
[collapse]I can’t finish this it hurts my brain and there was only like 2-3 arcs that I actually like and even then the rest of the arcs are bad so the couple I like can not pull this out of hell.
