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Too much exploration takes away the mystery. It's a great follow up to the last chapter. Before, Eldina (sp?) was a mystery. Though after investigation, she's just a sad woman, from the Midwest, who got plastic surgery to cope with rejection. This chapter reminds me of a dream I was obsessed with. I was trying to find out who the mysterious figure was in my dream. I would research a bunch of stuff, and when I found out the answer, I was disappointed. I'd rather not know who it was, so I can make up all sorts of lore about them. I'd rather not know and be desperately searching for a mystery, then to know and it be a lackluster answer.