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Seems okay, the concept didn't made that of an expression that this girl needs to find a guy. But for sure, those coincidence are just funny for me. Some terms or words they use like picked up.. was so not right.. well I mean it sounds like a hook *cough*er
But atleast I get to know the main char, the girls perspective,
I didnt expect the he would coach her, this bothers me most "the don't fall in love with me" this would be hard, an opposite sex to coach with and as they start it was really funny and hard
Now I will start to read this not just because @ page 27 it cracked me so much that my 3week old mucous came out and I'm so glad lol