- #42
> Mashima pulls off an attack that wipes out enemy with 100% health in one hit,
"oh boohoo this is such bullshit"
> Mashima kills off an extremely powerful enemy without some nakama power up thing, with nonsensical development that didn´t had any development prior and probably won´t receive any past this chapter.
"oh boohoo this is such bullshit"
there's seriously no winning with you people
Fixed that for you.
And if you wanna get technical. Here´s a checklist to bring this bullshit writing to regular Shounen level.
1. Have the villains struggle against Fairy Tails attacks!
2 .Don´t make them overpower the FT cast untill they pull out their "awesome one hit kill attack" in return!
3. Let a fight between two people last more than a single chapter!
4. Apply actual tactics to your fights!
Last chapter it was revealed that August cannot counter Cana´s attacks.
It went nowhere!
5. Make the characters work together to beat an enemy!
People didn´t complain whent Natsu and Gray defeated Mard Geer through teamwork.
It was somewhat bullshit that Gray was capeable of dispelling Memento Morti, but that´s a flaw with the spell individually not with the fight as a whole, which otherwise was well executed.It took Lucy to summon the Celestial Spirit King who supposedly is a broken summon to damage the guy and then Natsu and Gray had both to reach the brink of exhaustion to beat him.
More of that, less of this chapters horsehit and Fairy Tail would be a well received battle Shounen, probably on the level of One Piece.