Virtual World : Pocket Sanctuary

lol I'm so into this novel

FIRST THING FIRST.!!!!!!!
to any one that dont like multiple reincarnation then this is not for you
cuz the mc is not the only ibe to reincarnate

so with that out of the way





this novel is alright  not good, bad bad either if im to say 50/50..... the reason for this is i dont like multiple reincarnation novel. sigh... the author should put a multiple rencarnation warning

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it's great but a chapter is too short ......................................

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A good VR game novel. MC wasn't OP from the start, but I can see him become one. There's also some mystery. Author's writing is also improving gradually. I don't know if much of the concept in unique or not, but I am seeing some of them for the first time. And its really good. That's all for now.

PS: Can't comment on FL as they haven't played much part till the latest chap yet.

To Author: If you are gonna do harem, don't include more than 3 girls. Thank you.

Now that 50 Chaps are up, I am updating my previous review.
This is my first novel after reading webnovels for than 2 years, so except some grammatical mistakes. I would be happy to correct any mistakes if you readers point it out.
The main reason MC is playing the VR game is for money. So, he doesn't have grand ambitions like be the top player, etc.
The MC gradually becomes an OP character due to factors like future knowledge, some unexpected gains, etc.
Everything he does, he plans it and takes no. of measures in case of failures taking full advantage of his perfect memory due to reason unknown.
There are 3 main FL's that are really important characters. Yes, they will be in MC's harem.
But, the harem matter won't happen for 200 some chapters and it won't be some stupid forced harem like collecting Pokémon. So, do give it a try even if you don't like harem.
Some mysteries are there.
And lastly, you can ask any question you would like to in here. I will answer all of them.
Thanks For Reading My Novel.

I am up to the latest non-priv chapter, so here we go:

Writing Quality: First of all English isn't my first language so this is from my point of view. There are some minor mistakes from time to time that the author fixes as soon as they are pointed out so I don't have problems in that department.

Stability of Updates: 2 chapters per day is 5 stars as well. Nothing more to say here.

Story Development: So far I like the where the story is heading, there are some twists and turns. I like what happened in the latest chapters (Don't want to spoil anything in the review so I will leave it here).

Character Design: There is development in MC's character from the earlier chapters which is satisfactory for me, and from what I am seeing in the latest chapters he will evolve even more. There isn't a lot of focus on FLs in the early chapters so I think we will see more progress with them and side characters in the future.

World Background: That's the only thing that is lacking in my opinion. All of the descriptions of empires, capital ciites and so on are kinda hollow for me, there could be more details later on to make the immersion greater. I will still rate it 5 stars so the review stays at 5 stars  but the story is good enough to have overall 5 star rating.

This is a really good novel, don't waste your time here, just go read it, kudos to the author on a job well done and i wish you all the best in the future.