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Bro… why would someone write this. I hope no one reads this. I know I won’t.

A degenerate novel. Great for cultured people. Man, go ahead.

you really need to be sent to jail. sometimes I wonder if mature people write stories in this web novel

Seems a bit redundant. Idk… take over the women in his family, go to next kingdom, do the same seems to be general layout. it’s not bad I guess but when you add in the fact that he won’t have to struggle or put in much effort to gain the women in his family because their love for him is 90+, I have a feeling I won’t enjoy it as much as I could have.

But for those of you looking to read something like this, where a son conquers the entire family etc, this is probably right up your alley.

One bit of advice I have for the author is to change Bro -> Brother. And don’t say bro in every sentence the little sister says.
Whether or not it’s a Chinese setting, bro in every sentence and in and of itself seems a bit off to me. Then add on the fact that it is a Chinese setting, using the word brother would definitely be the more suitable choice.

If you ever go back to edit things, I think scaling down the numbers would make it more easier to understand. Numbers in the thousands and then millions just for dealing with one session of s * x is about… yeah. You could easily get away with making everything 100* smaller and not losing out on anything.

I’ll be dropping for now. If this appears on the rankings because it’s become very popular i might pick up again. See you later, maybe.

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content filled with pedophilia and grooming, don't read it unless you want to risk jail time.

Author why do you go and use your right hand until chapter 111 and then u can see your slow development of your novel? Or u can ask for your mother's help? U have guts to say that your novel will be better after chapter 100 with only 97 characters online?